What is the advantage of using money?

Okay, here's a shot at editing that paragraph to sound more like a real person talking:

"So, what's so great about using actual money, right? Well, for me, honestly, there's something about cold, hard cash that I just love. It's probably because I'm a bit old school, but I feel like it keeps me grounded, you know? Like, I can see my money disappearing, which is a HUGE help when I'm trying not to buy that extra pair of shoes I definitely don't need. Impulse buys are my weakness! And let's be real, there's a certain satisfaction in just handing over cash and being done with it. No waiting for cards to authorize, no worrying about someone hacking my account... ugh, the stress! I just feel safer, and more directly connected to what I'm spending. Does that make sense? Like, I'm actually aware of it, and that helps me feel, I don't know, more in control? Which equals less stress for this girl!"